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Sometimes i feel like my only friend,
Is an animal whos life is coming to an end,
The lightbulb on the ceiling with its radiant glow,
An old tree waiting for its final blow,
The last plant in Autmn before the frost,
A compass whos needle is eternally lost,
A human before the sky falls down,
A king who rules without his crown,
A little girl crying alone on her bed,
Wishing and wishing that she was dead,
I know that girl, and i know why she cries,
Everything lives, then everything dies.
The animal who died alone in the woods,
The lightbulb that cried, "I'd stay lit if i could!"
The tree that crashed straight to the ground,
The plant that froze without making a sound,
The compass whos needle spinns forever around,
The human who remaints will never be found,
The king who ruled that little girl,
With his missing crown, and her missing pearl,
I know why that little girl cried,
She cried because everything she loved just died.
©2005-2009 ~heartbroken-goth
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i wrote this alone in my woods, when i was VERY depresses for my own reasons...

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:iconbloodybeholder666:
this poem is amazing....your amazing...and so is how much i love you..your everything that i have...and everything that i've ever wanted...your the reason i wake up breathing each morning...i could write a million poems about how much i love you and live for you...i love you kristine :glomp: :hug: :blowkiss:

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:skull: I fester, I slither, you cannot hinder me,
for I am the new God of good things to be :skull:
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:cling: I hope everything is better, you know you have two people who care alot about you, so you're never alone :hug: Awesome poem, its a fav of course :hug:

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To see you when I wake up, is a gift I didn't think could be real
To know that you feel the same, as I do, is a Three-fold utopian dream
You do something to me
That I can't explain
So would I be out of line, If I said
I miss you.
:iconheartbroken-goth:
awww...thanx kels. :hug: :glomp:..hows ur stock account coming?

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:blackrose:I come from a world:blackrose:
:blackrose:Where lost souls roam:blackrose:
:blackrose:You may call this place hell:blackrose:
:blackrose:But I call it home:blackrose:
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:iconbloodybeholder666:
yea kristine...like i said...you did an amazing job!! great work! :hug: :glomp:

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:skull: I fester, I slither, you cannot hinder me,
for I am the new God of good things to be :skull:
:iconheartbroken-goth:
awww..thanx baby..i love you sooo much also :hug: :glmop: :smooch: :kiss: :hump:..lol i love you sooo much and thanx for the wonderful comment, it really means alot to me seeing as only you know the story behind the poem..i love you...:D :p :hug: :blowkiss:

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:blackrose:I come from a world:blackrose:
:blackrose:Where lost souls roam:blackrose:
:blackrose:You may call this place hell:blackrose:
:blackrose:But I call it home:blackrose:
[link]
:iconheartbroken-goth:
lol oh would you look at that, i spelt glomp wrong...:glomp: :glomp: :glomp: :glomp: lol i think thats makes up for it :D

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:blackrose:I come from a world:blackrose:
:blackrose:Where lost souls roam:blackrose:
:blackrose:You may call this place hell:blackrose:
:blackrose:But I call it home:blackrose:
[link]
:iconbloodybeholder666:
lol ok, i love you soo much!! :hug:

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:skull: I fester, I slither, you cannot hinder me,
for I am the new God of good things to be :skull:
:iconbloodybeholder666:
yea its no problem hun! you did a great job!! i prolly should have wrote more! lol i love you soo much :hug: :blowkiss:

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:skull: I fester, I slither, you cannot hinder me,
for I am the new God of good things to be :skull:
:iconheartbroken-goth:
i love you sooo much too!! *dramatic movie scene again* :hug: :glomp: :smooch:

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:blackrose:I come from a world:blackrose:
:blackrose:Where lost souls roam:blackrose:
:blackrose:You may call this place hell:blackrose:
:blackrose:But I call it home:blackrose:
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